Thank you to Haiku Heights for your weekly Haiku prompts. This is my first submission. Prompt #101- page.
PAGES
pages from my heart
permeate forsaken me
yet hope flickers on
January 9, 2012 by MyWordsWhisper
Thank you to Haiku Heights for your weekly Haiku prompts. This is my first submission. Prompt #101- page.
PAGES
pages from my heart
permeate forsaken me
yet hope flickers on
You just keep getting better.
Thanks, Sandy. Isn’t it funny that we are always our own harshest critics! At least I am!
And, by the way, your Haiku is just beautiful!
I agree with Sandy, better and better, and you were already fantastic 🙂
Thank you, Marita! I always enjoy your posts and look forward to new ones!
Good one!
Thanks, Patti. I don’t know how you can keep up with your blog so well and all the comments, too! The hurrieder I go, the behinder I get!!!
Some things don’t get done! lol
Love it! And I love a good Haiku
Thanks, TBM. I do love Haiku, but I think I love Tanka just as much!
These sound like sad pages…
On Which Page Is it Written?
I think every heart has sad pages, but the important thing is to have other pages to offset the sad ones. Then, life, love, happiness, achievement become a part of the pages of the heart too.
Thank you for your comment. You have a lovely blog.
though forsaken, hope flickers on….love it!
Thank you, Jeannette. Looking forward to checking out your bog!
Thank you for making me discover Haiku Heights- what a great concept. And loving reading your haiku, very inspiring!
Thank you, for the visit. We will probably run into each other a bit more over at Haiku Heights!